Wednesday, 6 May 2020
Godilocks and the three bears
Once upon a time there was three bears one was Emily and Jayla and Zuli there mum was making porridge for breakfast then they said we should leave it then they decided to go and have an adventure then a little gril came and her name was Goldilocks she went inside of the house then she opened the door and said hello in won there then she saw her stomach rumbling then she saw three porridge on the table and then she went and ate mummy bears porridge then she said this porridge is to hot then she tasted daddy bears porridge then she said this porridge is to cold then she tasted baby bears porridge then she said just right
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Awesome retell Marzuli. Take a look and see if you can work out where full stops go. At the end of an idea you need to put a full stop.
ReplyDeleteCapital letters are used for names - can you work on those too.
Great to read your writing Marzuli.