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Once upon a time there was a scary witch and her name was Diana she was very bad witch she would poison people and make them as her slave she has a black hat and a black dress that she would wear it a hundred times that she smell and a magical broom that she could fly it and her face was green she would do lots of poison potion and throw it at people and poison them for nothing they did to the the scary witch
She went to jail 5000 times and she keeps escaping and keeps making trouble.
After she made lots of trouble she said to herself she making to much trouble then she suddenly changed the people and ran back to her old house and began to cry and all the people came to her house and gave her a prize because she stopped making too much trouble then they gave her a new house and a car and some fancy clothing and she began to make money and live happily ever after.
Once upon a time there was a scary witch and her name was Diana she was very bad witch she would poison people and make them as her slave she has a black hat and a black dress that she would wear it a hundred times that she smell and a magical broom that she could fly it and her face was green she would do lots of poison potion and throw it at people and poison them for nothing they did to the the scary witch
She went to jail 5000 times and she keeps escaping and keeps making trouble.
After she made lots of trouble she said to herself she making to much trouble then she suddenly changed the people and ran back to her old house and began to cry and all the people came to her house and gave her a prize because she stopped making too much trouble then they gave her a new house and a car and some fancy clothing and she began to make money and live happily ever after.
Your picture is very scary Marzuli.
ReplyDeleteCan you see where full stops might need to go in this story?
I love the creativity in your story - well done!
Hi Marzuli.. Diana is one scary witch! Thank you for sharing your story and picture.
ReplyDeleteHi Marzuli,
ReplyDeleteWOW I loved your story about Diana! It is very interesting, I kept wanting to read more. She is definitely scary. I wonder how she kept escaping jail hmm? Also your picture is awesome, I love her green face! Well done Marzuli, you have created a wonderful story and picture today, keep it up :) Excited to see you when school starts and give you a big hug!
- Miss Vili