Mr McDonald asked the kids if they want a Competition Tim was worried because he had a bear named Toby he gave him lots of kisses on his nose and almost hugged all his fur he said to him self the final day. Tim carried him in a brown bag.he was worried he'd win. Mrs Hall was the judge for the day.
And my favourite part was when Tim carried him on he's back on the way home back safe and happy with he's first trophy and Told he's mum. and he's mum was really happy and she gave him a big hug.
Good work, Marzuli! Please check the punctuation of your story. Thank you for sharing your work!
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